For this discussion, review the article titled, How Travel Deeply Changes Your Life
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. Then, use the Review Checklist to summarize your review of the paragraph.
In your discussion post, please discuss the following:
- Are the thesis statement and the topic sentences appropriate? Do they provide enough detail? Explain. If applicable, explain how you would improve the topic sentences or thesis statement.
- Are the supporting details on topic and specific? Do they use many vivid details? Are the details in a logical order? Explain. If applicable, explain how you would improve the supporting sentences and what specific details you would include.
- Does the conclusion sum up the entire essay? Explain. If applicable, explain how you would improve the conclusion.
- Are there any changes in the essay that you would make in word choice or punctuation? Would you add any transitions? Explain.
- Discuss what you think are the strengths of the essay.
- Discuss what you think are the weaknesses of the essay.